http://theredstars.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] theredstars.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] runmakitarun 2007-09-10 03:06 am (UTC)

The sorceress has been at war for a long time. She had already taken in Mary Anne's equipment and knew that there was nothing there that was a serious threat to her. But that was when Mary Anne didn't have a sword. Because she didn't.

It's the sudden appearance of a weapon that shouldn't be there more than it is the sudden shift of direction that causes that split second of hesitation. That oh-so-fatal split second.

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